Vicente the Hyena

Zing: Hyena's rock so I made a hyena char. is name is Vicente and he is coolio! 8D He pwns your soul.

Yeah, on Wendsday got this coolio art set that was gianormous art set from Ryan as a x-mas present...and I like...was using it and stuff...and I desided to draw a wild dog, but then it kinda turned into a hyena...and yeah. I love this piccy cause I usually suck with colored pencils.

Vicente is so awesome man...I'm working on a story aout him. What I have so far is that he's a really kind, soft-hearted hyena who is very gernerous and smart and stuff. However, most of the other hyena's in africa are exactally the opposite; they tend to be agressive, selfish, sly, and have a sick sense of humor, especially the females (in case you didn't know, female hyenas are stronger and more aggressive then the males). Because of his differences, Vicente lives by himself to avoid bullying and attacks from other hyenas. So yeah...that makes him kinda sad though, and he's really lonely. But everytime he tries to join a clan of hyenas, he just gets chased away. So he travles around Africa, looking for a clan that will accept him.
One day, however, he stumbled upon the territory of the Swift-Claw clan, lead by an extreamly strick female named Moon-Lyght. When he tried to join, he got a swift bite to the ear and Moon-Lyght snarled at him, saying, " No hyena clan wants a sniviling, whimpy little male like you! We have enough pups already, we don't need another one!"
Then, he is chased out of Moon-Lyght's territory by whombers, or strong female soldiers that protect the clan's territory and keep the males in line.
Vicente, however, dosen't give up. He was inspired by Moon-Lyghts absolute control over her caln, and her strong, piercing gaze that held them all in check. He desides to observe Moon-Lyight's clan from just outside their territory, and he hoped that by lingering around, not only would he get an accasional scrap from their hunts, but he might also get them to one day change thir minds. For weeks he watches the clan play, hunt and live together in compleate harmony and balance, with not one hyena out of line. He also sees Moon-Lyght playing with her pups, and Vicente is amazed that she can me so strick with her clan, and yet so gentle with her pups. And, as you may have guessed it, he falls in love with her.

Usually I dispise these kind of stories, and if it was up to me I'd change it. But this is Vicente's story...I asked him about his story and this is what he told me so...yeah...it's his fault!

But yeah, so now that he is not only inspired by but also in love with Moon-Lyght, he just wants to join her family that much more. So, he tries again, and confronts Moon-Lyght with his love. This angers her so badly that she desided to dispose of him herself this time, and she totally pwns his ass. ;D In other words, he gets the crap beat out of him.
But yeah, so he is all "D: Aww, she doesn't love me...whine emo blah." So he leaves Moon's territory to go emo about someplace else. While he's nursing his injeries and stuff he makes friends with a young wild dog, named Sycilly, who is very kind and sweet, yet very funny. She had travled halfway across Africa to warn all the animals that a strange bird was coming to attack them. She shows Vicente the hard orange leaf that it put on her ear as evidence. Vicente, who is still being emo about Moon-Lyight, pays her warning no mind, but does deside to join her on her quest simply because he is so lonely.
Well, one day, the strange bird catches up to them and Vicente sees that Sycilly was right, so he races back to the Swift-Claw territory to warn Moon-Lyght. Sycilly tries to stop him, but he is so blinded by love that he dosen't listen. In the end, he manages to get to Moon-Lyght just in time to get captured with her and one of her pack members, a whomber named Splice.

That's about as far as I got, yeah...basically what happens next is that the bird, aka the helecoptor, takes Vicente, Moon, Splice, and Sycilly (yes, she got captured too) to a zoo in North Dakota. Why North Dakota? I have no idea. But yeah so...they haveta escape and somehow get back to Africa. And also, durning thir time in the zoo Vicente gets over his little obbession for Moon sense he figures out that without her pack to run she's a total bitch who uses people to get what she wants. She even ends up kills Splice O.o. But she dun kill Vicente, cause he's too cool to die
So WHOOOO VICENTE!